Getting Started With Mentor Sentences - Ideas By Jivey: For the Classroom

Getting Started With Mentor Sentences

Some common emails I get when people are ready to start mentor sentences, or are in the first week and feel like it's not going like it should, go something like this:
"Help! My students aren't able to write anything down the first week!"
"What do you do if students don't know anything?"

I want you to think about everything else you teach through the course of your day, and every other routine you have to explain and demonstrate at the beginning of the year. How many times do you repeat yourself? How many times do you have to walk them through the same thing over and over again before they understand expectations? How many times do you not get through all your first week plans because it takes three times longer to do EVERYTHING than it should? Mentor Sentence time is no different, especially if this is the first time your students have EVER done mentor sentences (if they didn't have it in a prior grade).  

Your students are going to need a TON of modeling, prompting, and explanation the first few weeks of school, just as with any other routine. And they AREN'T going to just magically know everything. But if you start out slow and gradually build up to "grade level expectations," students will feel more successful, and you will be helping them establish the routine necessary for the whole year. And one of the BEST parts of mentor sentences... the spiral review every week! Students who aren't "getting it" the first few times will get it down the road after seeing it several more times. 

In this post, I am going to lay out exactly what I would do the first week of school for mentor sentences with explanations and pictures, as well as video at the end. Buckle up- this is a long one!

No matter where you are in the school year, when you start mentor sentences you should all start the same way. You might have already read this post about not teaching grammar in isolation (and if not, go read it first!) where I lay out the reasons why I don't "start the year" by explaining all the different parts of speech. Start mentor sentences as soon as you can (I suggest the first full week of school) with LOTS of modeling. 

Most of the learning during mentor sentence time is going to happen through discussion. Practicing having class conversations (listening and taking turns talking) is going to be essential to teach- and a great thing to implement, not just for mentor sentence time!

The first week you begin mentor sentences, you may not even want students to write in their notebook. I like to walk them through the routine by writing it all out for them to see, and not worry about whether they are copying or not. 

In this demonstration blog post, I will be using lessons that are in this Do Unto Otters pack in my TPT store:

Yes, it is necessary to read the book for students to have context of the sentence. If you can, try to read it at some point before starting your lesson, but if not, you definitely want to read it before Wednesday. I encourage you to use the book for other lessons too, not just mentor sentences. Mentor texts are great for reading and writing mini-lessons, too! Many books can be found on YouTube as read alouds, and even on websites like Storyline Online!

If you want to skip over the written explanation and JUST SEE THE VIDEO, scroll to the bottom of this post! 


On this day, you are going to teach students to look at a sentence for what makes it special/different/unique from a "normal" sentence. This is their time to notice. Because many of them aren't used to analyzing a sentence this way, it will be important for you to prompt them a lot and even tell them what YOU notice about the sentence if they truly don't say a single thing. Generally though, someone will always be the "talker" and anxious to speak up. :) Read the sentence together, and then ask them what they notice about the sentence. 
Prompts you might use:
What do you see in this sentence that looks different than other sentences?
What do you notice about this sentence that makes it a good sentence?
Does anything stand out to you in this sentence?

Students might tell you they see a capital and a period first. We want to move them away from those answers as we continue through the year, but that's a great start for the first week! They might tell you they see an apostrophe in the contraction. This would be a great time to talk for just a minute about contractions and remind them of that skill from previous grades. You also hope they will tell you there are adjectives, or describing words. This would be the focus skill for the week. If they don't tell you that, IT'S OK!! It's the first week, and this will be a great time for you to model a think-aloud about what YOU notice in the sentence. 

List all of the things they (and you) notice about the sentence either on a chart or in a notebook under a document camera. 
Tell them this week, you will be focusing on making writing more exciting with adjectives, and if appropriate, allow them to do something during your writing time with this skill as well. This will help begin the transfer of mentor sentence time to writing time. 


On the second day, you will want to discuss the specific parts of speech they see in the sentence. This is generally when teachers want to cry in the beginning of the year. But listen, the important thing here is to start off simple and build through the year. Yes, fourth graders should know more in a sentence than the nouns. But guess what? If they have been taught with grammar in isolation all of their school career, they are going to have a really hard time applying those "rules" to a sentence. Remember, the key is to make sure they understand WHY those words are what they are, and how they connect to other words in the sentence. (In other words, don't label just for the sake of labeling!)

Once again, you need to model, model, model. And just because I labeled all of the words in the lesson plan for your reference doesn't mean you need to label all of the words for the class!

Start off by asking them if they know how to name any of the words in the sentence. You can remind them of how to name them: nouns, verbs, adjectives... in my past experience, just like on day 1, you'll usually have at least one kid who knows SOMETHING and they will speak up. 

In the sentence from Do Unto Otters, the two most important things I'd make sure to talk them through are nouns and adjectives (because adjectives are the focus). If you want to label other parts, especially if students speak up and say they know that word, then do it! What I would NOT do is talk them through every other word they do not know and try to teach them what those parts of speech are. For one, you don't have time for that in a mini-lesson. But also, you don't want to overwhelm them. Take it slow and work your way up over the next several weeks. I promise, halfway through the year, they are going to know those parts of speech because of the consistent spiral manner of the routine.

This is also the day to do some more focused work on the skill of the week. I like to use interactive notebook activities to review and/or teach my skills. 


On the third day, students are going to revise the mentor sentence. You will want to explain what this means- making the sentence better than it already is...making it sound better... etc. 

Guess what you are going to do this day? MODEL AGAIN! :)

Since the focus of this week is adjectives, it will be very easy to revise for adjectives. Create a scaffolded, cloze sentence to show them how you will think through revising the sentence.
Allow them to help you think of words that could belong in the blank or to replace "good."
Once you get into the routine after a few weeks, you will continue to show a model of a revised sentence (but not necessarily doing a think-aloud every time) so they can discuss and identify what you've done to revise the sentence, which gives them ideas of things they can do on their own. 


This day will be the trickiest for them at first, but will soon become their favorite day because they get to write about whatever they want to write about! On the fourth day, students will imitate the style and structure of the sentence. This is another reason why the sentences start off  "easy" at the beginning of the year. Students need to understand how to imitate a simple sentence before they can ever do it with more difficult ones. Every now and then, I get emails and feedback about the sentences being too easy in unit 1- remember, you are setting them up to be successful for the rest of the year! :)

I bet you'll never guess what I'm going to tell you to do on this day............... MODEL! :)

Provide students another scaffolded cloze sentence- this time with blanks replacing words. Most of them have seen mad libs before, so I like to set it up that way.
Talk through your thoughts as you decide what to write. Discuss picking a topic first, and then moving to write words in each blank. "I want to write about all of my new friends in this class, so I'm going to write classmate in the blank for my noun. Now what kind of classmate do I want? Well I'd like a helpful classmate! It's nice to have a helpful classmate."
Just like on day 3, once you get into the routine after a few weeks, you will continue to show a model of an imitated sentence (but not necessarily doing a think-aloud every time) so they can discuss and identify what you've done to imitate the sentence, which gives them ideas of things they can do on their own. 


This is the day when you will want to have students see how they will be assessed each week. I encourage you to use the quizzes as formative assessments to see what students still need for pulling small groups or one-on-one conferencing.... BUT I am not discouraging you from using them as grades. Just be mindful of how long you have taught the skill before taking it for a grade. :)

I would display the quiz on the board and do it together as a class the first week. 
This will help them understand what needs to be done each week. It's also a great way to continue teaching the concept of adjectives- having them talk to you about how they know the words are adjectives!

I like to write on a chart that stays up all week long, but do what works best for your classroom style!

Here is a wonderful example of how it looks in a fourth grade classroom from Lindy Bulsterbaum's students in San Antonio, Texas!

Ready to see all of this together? 

Here is a video I filmed in my office, walking you through each step of each day. It is not a professional video, so no judging ;-) but I hope it helps you see how it all works together!
I hope this post has been helpful and encouraging to you- your students WILL get better with a lot of practice, MODELING :) and time!

For more information about mentor sentences, check out Jeff Anderson's books! I adapted his ideas to make them work in my elementary classroom!


  1. Thank you so much. I am starting mentor sentences this year and I really appreciate how you walked through each day.

  2. Thank for this post and the videos. I am very excited to begin using mentor sentences this year with my fourth graders. Our first week of school is only four days. Do you suggest starting mentor sentences with a four day week or do you think it would be best to start the following week which is a five day week?

    1. A four day week is still good! :)

  3. Jivey, I watched your mentoring sentence 3-5 and k-2. I teach 2nd and want to buy the whole package but I am worried I don't have all the text/books to use. Does each weeks mentor sentence have to go with a certain book? What if I don't have it?


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